Hi bloggers
Today I made a comic strip in about two hours it was worth. We are learning Maori and all the words in Maori and what happens It is very interesting. I hope you enjoy my post. This is my work.
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mrs Brown. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Hi bloggers
Today I made a comic strip in about two hours it was worth. We are learning Maori and all the words in Maori and what happens It is very interesting. I hope you enjoy my post. This is my work.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Lucas - Ko Jo Earl tōku ingoa. I like your slide show - I can see you have tried to use some of the new kupu you have learned. One thing I think you can do to improve this post is to use a title that matches what your post is about so instead of Cool Comic - it could be Te Reo Comic Strip or Māori Conversation. What do you think you could change your title to?
ReplyDeletei like the blog post i find it cool and are you going to a part two?
ReplyDeleteHi kellan maybe I will in the future who knows
DeleteHi thanks for commenting mrs earl I will change the slide show soon
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Lucas,
ReplyDeleteI really liked looking at your awesomme comic strip this week. I liked how you used your friends names in this slide. Great Job!
Ari