Peak comes back to the high sky to deliver more cargo Gus has a shark for him peek leaves Gus gets furious after peak leaves to another cloud he summons a lot of lightning even enough to destroy the world. And then Peak comes back with some gear all ready to help and deliver murderous creatures to the wild. His next creature was an eel. Poor Peak flew down with his murderous cargo. How would peak carry more rambunctious cargo?
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mrs Brown. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Wednesday, July 22, 2020
Part eight partly cloudy
Peak comes back to the high sky to deliver more cargo Gus has a shark for him peek leaves Gus gets furious after peak leaves to another cloud he summons a lot of lightning even enough to destroy the world. And then Peak comes back with some gear all ready to help and deliver murderous creatures to the wild. His next creature was an eel. Poor Peak flew down with his murderous cargo. How would peak carry more rambunctious cargo?
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That was awesome Lucas maybe you should put peak instead of Gus.
ReplyDeleteok good feedback alex by
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment and the feedback