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Wednesday, July 22, 2020

Part eight partly cloudy


Peak comes back to the high sky to deliver more cargo Gus has a shark for him peek leaves Gus gets furious after peak leaves to another cloud he summons a lot of lightning even enough to destroy the world. And then Peak comes back with some gear all ready to help and deliver murderous creatures to the wild. His next creature was an eel. Poor Peak flew down with his murderous cargo.  How would peak carry more rambunctious cargo?                                                                                                                                                                                                         

2 comments:

  1. That was awesome Lucas maybe you should put peak instead of Gus.

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  2. ok good feedback alex by
    thanks for the comment and the feedback

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