Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mrs Brown. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, April 23, 2020
Anzac day facts Link.
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Hi Lucas,
ReplyDeleteGood job on your Anzac slide. There are so many interesting facts about the Anzacs and why we commemorate Anzac Day. I particularly liked your title page with the poppies, as they are a major symbol for Anzac Day. I would have liked to have seen some more pictures on the other pages, and maybe for next time you could put the information into your own words.
Hi Lucas, nice work on the Anzac slide. You have managed to fine some really interesting facts about Anzac. The volunteers were such amazing people doing this for their country. I would love to see you explain a little more about the task and pop your goal in as well so people know why you were doing the slide.
ReplyDeletethank you both for commenting and nice
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