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Thursday, April 23, 2020

Torty's adventurers

This is my comic strip about torty the teacher said if your in group c you will have to wright a comic strip about a tortaise called tortey and his adventres with stewrt.
Firstly Torty went  hibnating
Secondly Torty was almost dead from leaves burning
Thirdly, Torty got stolen to the 

circus.
Next he went to his first ever school.
Then Torty fell in love with boomerang.
Lastly Tortey hibernating 
again.
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 24, 2020 at 1:23 PM

    Hi Lucas,
    Well done on your recount about Torty! She certainly had a very long and adventurous life. She’s was also so lucky to have Stewart rescue her and bring her all the way to NZ from Greece.

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  2. Mrs BryceApril 26, 2020 at 10:47 AM

    Hi Lucas, good job creating comic strip about Torty's life in New Zealand. She was very lucky that Stewart looked after her. Remember when you put follow up work to add your goal so that people reading your blog know what you have been working on.

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