Hi bloggers
Today me and my brother Adam had made a dam, our dam wasn't that successful because the water escaped underneath the timber.
We made the dam in our backyard
Do you think you can make a dam?
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Hi bloggers
Today me and my brother Adam had made a dam, our dam wasn't that successful because the water escaped underneath the timber.
We made the dam in our backyard
Do you think you can make a dam?
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Hey Lucas and Adam,
ReplyDeleteGreat work on your dam and great video. It was cool to see that you had a really good place to test it at a large scale. I hope the garden is doing well now.
I think your Dam worked really well and most full scale dams do let out the water at the base so it’s very similar to that.
Great work boys and Merry Christmas,
See you later in the comments,
Daniel
Sorry I replied late I was camping in Motueaka.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comments and happy new year
Hey Lucas,
ReplyDeleteWow that sounds super fun, what stuff did you get up to at Motueka?
I hope you had a happy New Years too, great to see your back and posting activities again, looking foreword to seeing your new posts. You can do the activities in any order so feel free to start with ones you missed that look interesting to you.
Daniel
Hi Daniel
ReplyDeleteAt motueaka we went to Kaiteriteri beach twice on the second time we went on a boat. we also had a camp disco.
Thanks for commenting.