Hi bloggers
today i will show you an awesome piece of art.
was it creative?
hope you enjoy
I found the materials at the forest.
The materials are flax, bark and grass.
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mrs Brown. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Hi bloggers
today i will show you an awesome piece of art.
was it creative?
hope you enjoy
I found the materials at the forest.
The materials are flax, bark and grass.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Lucas,
ReplyDeleteIt is great to see you getting into the Summer Learning Journey. I am impressed with the art you have created, making it into something saying hi is pretty cool. If you wanted to see some other work others are doing around our cluster you could check out Amelia's Blog and Minttu's Blog and leave them a comment.
Something that would make your blog post even better would be if you wrote a little bit more about your work. Things like how you made it and where you got the materials from can be a good start.
Keep up the great learning and blogging,
:) Sharon - Te Ara Tūhura Education Programme Leader
Thx Sharon for the feedback i did it for you!;)
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Lucas,
ReplyDeleteYour Art this week was very creative now that makes me want to try and make one too.
Maybe next time you could tell us a little bit more on how you made it.
Ari