should children have chocolate for breakfast

Goals: L2 - identify important information and relate it to the overall meaning & L3 - identify several ideas, discuss the author's stance or purpose, and understand the relationships in text. 

Name of text	Arguments for...	Arguments against…	What is your opinion on this topic?
Should children be allowed to eat chocolate for breakfast?	Chocolate is not good for your body or anyone's body, not even a man with one kg. Chocolate is not good for animals and people.	Chocolate is what we should be eating forever for breakfast, you should have it because it tastes good.	If you have some chocolate you will want more and more and you will feel sick and not able to play soccer with your friends, you do not want to throw up in front of tons of people.

bao part 4

                                           Bao  adverb  positive or negative feelings persuasive verb

Bao was playing soccer with his friends. Suddenly he made a marvellous head butt. Sadly his head was now as flat as a pancake. His friends high fived him then out of nowhere came mum scooped him up and took him away. Bao was miserable that he could not play any more. Mum and Bao went on a tram together to make him feel better from the soccer accident. So they traveled home together talking all the way home.

commenting 2.

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how to write the best persuasive text.

 Hi bloggers

 today i am going to show you how to make the best persuasive text in history here is my work.

A persuasive text needs a title and a argument, it needs a connective, you need reasons, also strong language also you have to have a restate opinion lastly a conclusion. 

 A persuasive text is an argument that is a fight about what is better. The main starting words are i believe, i think and i know. 

example I believe dogs are the cutest pets because they never leave you. They come in any sizes.

part 5 the present

 Finally Jake lets Baxter come outside to play with him. He firstly gets his crutches to go outside. Baxter is so joyful to play with Jake. Jake throws the ball and says fetch. Baxter runs as fast as a cheetah and gives the ball back to him. Jake now thinks his pup is the cutest thing ever. He throws the ball five more times he hugs Baxter when he sees him.

Part eight partly cloudy

Peak comes back to the high sky to deliver more cargo Gus has a shark for him peek leaves Gus gets furious after peak leaves to another cloud he summons a lot of lightning even enough to destroy the world. And then Peak comes back with some gear all ready to help and deliver murderous creatures to the wild. His next creature was an eel. Poor Peak flew down with his murderous cargo.  How would peak carry more rambunctious cargo?                                                                                                                                                                                                         

silent writing.

Once me and and my freinds went on adventure to find diamonds in minecraft but instead we found wither skulls we put three wither heads on the skeleton. Then a giant wither storm formed. Everybody escape I said but the wither storm
Was too powerful to battle. We spawned some other mobs
But the mobs got defeated in one second. so we invited our other friends. First me and my friends tried an ender dragon flame atack
nowhere near to killing the wither storm. So we needed to make our own pet wither storm as soon as the battle started our pet wither storm evolved to its final level.
The battle was only getting started the two wither storm
Made a really big hole that would be nearly impossible
To see the bottom. I jumped down the hole when I was
Also making a trampoline (It seems dangerous but We
Don,t care! Our pet wither storm made a giant explosion
That destroyed our house. I was so upset I killed a sheep.
But at least when it was falling down the wither storm died. So we went to find diamonds underground.


But instead we found emerald so then we used the ender dragon to find us diamond but it didn,t find us enough diamonds to make a diamond axe,sword,pickaxe and hoe.
So we mined diamonds with the ender dragon witch was still not enough diamonds. We were get emeralds now
And trust me it was annoying. But at least I could craft a diamond axe and diamond sword. But then the ender dragon started attacking us so we shot him with our bow and arrows it shot a fire ball at us so we hit the fireball
Back at the ender dragon but it didn't do a single bit of
Damage to the ender dragon which was annoying.
Suddenly izzy died now there was only boys fighting the ender dragon we used our sword to attack it when it
Came up to us. Then we used our axe,s for when it
Shot a fireball at us so then we realised it was gaining
Strength because of the crystals that was around
The ender dragon. So we broke the crystals so hard that it can only use its healing ability. So we started attacking it,s heart but that did nothing. So we finally got attacked and the ender dragon used its fireball ability.So we needed to have enchant weapons so we used the command /enchant bow 1000. that command made the bow so strong. So we shot another arrow at its heart which almost killed it but it used it’s healing ability. So we built a house with a balcony to shot the arrow’s from which was a wee bit useful.The ender dragon kept on breaking a little bit of the house so we reaperd it. So we decided to make a bigger house. The house we made now was ten stories high.With some traps to kill the ender dragon and it worked very well so we kept on using the traps. We were tired on waiting so we ate the food we had to make us more stronger.So we enchanted our bow again this time we enchanted it to one million which we finally got attacked. It healed again and it was an inch till dieing. but now we needed to start all over again which was really annoying. So we non stopped attacking it and it non stop healing. So we attacked it one more time but that didn’t work so we summoned in the wither dragon so the almighty battle has begun the wither dragon attacked him with a fireball now that defeated the ender dragon but the wither dragon started attacking us so we decided to build a underground house to take cover from the wither dragon so we made summand some pet t rex's to ride on so we kept on mining until we had enough resources to build a 100 hundred story house. When we finished building. We went to our traps room and launched lazer beams at the wither dragon and that didn't work that well so we made more traps like electric fence , lava launcher , giant drill´s that kill you , dispenser with dangerous arrows. We also had a plan to enchant a sword to 1000 and lunch it on our bow.So we kept on shooting swords instead of arrows and trust me that worked a lot. So that was our plan for five days when the five days was over we didn't have any more swords. To use so we used pickaxes instead and that worked not as well as the swords. So we used pickaxes and arrows together We said booyah because we found out where it’s hit box was. So we kept on shooting it’s head because that was it’s hit box. So we decided to have water because it’s been one year without water. we wanted to have more traps but we just couldn't find out which one so we only used our traps again. A fireball hit us in the head so we squirted water on us. And we ran around in horror for seven minutes. We were so scared we even jumped in our pool for twenty min´s and Alex even recorded himself in the pool that we made yesterday. So we might have started to make a world pool like we always do cause we wanted to make one. We had so fun we forgot about the wither dragon and being scared. So we told each other jokes like we always would too distracted us from getting hurt like we normally would. And we made a diving board to have more fun but then we remembered the wither dragon. So we freaked out again. We got bedrock to stop our house from getting destroyed from the really dangerous wither dragon we went to the shop to our garage to make elytra to fly at the same time as attacking. And that was also great so we shot some pickaxes with arrows up there. And we had the idea of making god arrows to do lots of damage. So we shot at it´s head to get so much damage on it. And that definitely worked but it only did only a wee bit of damage. But we know that something weird is happening because the dragon would normally shoot fireballs more than we shot arrows and we were surprised and scared. So we kept on shooting it in the head until no more. And we loved victory like everybody does so that's why we want to fight. And we shot and shot until no more and we kept on getting shot as well.