maths wk 3 t4

 hi bloggers today I will be showing my maths for this week I hope you learn something. I learnt how to do place value and hard questions.

did you know that you have to share between both numbers if it is addition and add the same thing in minus. 

should children have chocolate for breakfast

Goals: L2 - identify important information and relate it to the overall meaning & L3 - identify several ideas, discuss the author's stance or purpose, and understand the relationships in text. 

Name of text	Arguments for...	Arguments against…	What is your opinion on this topic?
Should children be allowed to eat chocolate for breakfast?	Chocolate is not good for your body or anyone's body, not even a man with one kg. Chocolate is not good for animals and people.	Chocolate is what we should be eating forever for breakfast, you should have it because it tastes good.	If you have some chocolate you will want more and more and you will feel sick and not able to play soccer with your friends, you do not want to throw up in front of tons of people.

bao part 4

                                           Bao  adverb  positive or negative feelings persuasive verb

Bao was playing soccer with his friends. Suddenly he made a marvellous head butt. Sadly his head was now as flat as a pancake. His friends high fived him then out of nowhere came mum scooped him up and took him away. Bao was miserable that he could not play any more. Mum and Bao went on a tram together to make him feel better from the soccer accident. So they traveled home together talking all the way home.

commenting 2.

 hey bloggers I will be showing you how to show comment on peoples blog once again i hope you enjoy.

how to write the best persuasive text.

 Hi bloggers

 today i am going to show you how to make the best persuasive text in history here is my work.

A persuasive text needs a title and a argument, it needs a connective, you need reasons, also strong language also you have to have a restate opinion lastly a conclusion. 

 A persuasive text is an argument that is a fight about what is better. The main starting words are i believe, i think and i know. 

example I believe dogs are the cutest pets because they never leave you. They come in any sizes.

part 5 the present

 Finally Jake lets Baxter come outside to play with him. He firstly gets his crutches to go outside. Baxter is so joyful to play with Jake. Jake throws the ball and says fetch. Baxter runs as fast as a cheetah and gives the ball back to him. Jake now thinks his pup is the cutest thing ever. He throws the ball five more times he hugs Baxter when he sees him.

Part eight partly cloudy

Peak comes back to the high sky to deliver more cargo Gus has a shark for him peek leaves Gus gets furious after peak leaves to another cloud he summons a lot of lightning even enough to destroy the world. And then Peak comes back with some gear all ready to help and deliver murderous creatures to the wild. His next creature was an eel. Poor Peak flew down with his murderous cargo.  How would peak carry more rambunctious cargo?