Hi bloggers
Today me and my brother Adam had made a dam, our dam wasn't that successful because the water escaped underneath the timber.
We made the dam in our backyard
Do you think you can make a dam?
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mrs Brown. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Hi bloggers
Today me and my brother Adam had made a dam, our dam wasn't that successful because the water escaped underneath the timber.
We made the dam in our backyard
Do you think you can make a dam?
Hi bloggers
today i will show you an awesome piece of art.
was it creative?
hope you enjoy
I found the materials at the forest.
The materials are flax, bark and grass.
Hi bloggers
today i will teach you how to make a quality blog comment again this time i will face reveal hope you enjoy
hi bloggers today I will be showing my maths for this week I hope you learn something. I learnt how to do place value and hard questions.
did you know that you have to share between both numbers if it is addition and add the same thing in minus.
Name of text
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Arguments for...
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Arguments against…
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What is your opinion on this topic?
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Should children be allowed to eat chocolate for breakfast?
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Chocolate is not good for your body or anyone's body, not even a man with one kg. Chocolate is not good for animals and people.
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Chocolate is what we should be eating forever for breakfast, you should have it because it tastes good.
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If you have some chocolate you will want more and more and you will feel sick and not able to play soccer with your friends, you do not want to throw up in front of tons of people.
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Bao adverb positive or negative feelings persuasive verb
Bao was playing soccer with his friends. Suddenly he made a marvellous head butt. Sadly his head was now as flat as a pancake. His friends high fived him then out of nowhere came mum scooped him up and took him away. Bao was miserable that he could not play any more. Mum and Bao went on a tram together to make him feel better from the soccer accident. So they traveled home together talking all the way home.
hey bloggers I will be showing you how to show comment on peoples blog once again i hope you enjoy.
Hi bloggers
today i am going to show you how to make the best persuasive text in history here is my work.
A persuasive text needs a title and a argument, it needs a connective, you need reasons, also strong language also you have to have a restate opinion lastly a conclusion.
A persuasive text is an argument that is a fight about what is better. The main starting words are i believe, i think and i know.
example I believe dogs are the cutest pets because they never leave you. They come in any sizes.
Finally Jake lets Baxter come outside to play with him. He firstly gets his crutches to go outside. Baxter is so joyful to play with Jake. Jake throws the ball and says fetch. Baxter runs as fast as a cheetah and gives the ball back to him. Jake now thinks his pup is the cutest thing ever. He throws the ball five more times he hugs Baxter when he sees him.